"The Crawl of Chufule" - Day 8 (I)

Another mild notation here. I just finished the rewrite of Day2's stuff, thus closing that portion of the draft for-ev-er. It's all in chapter form from there out. I did a quick word count and found that, after all the additions and subtractions I have gained 218 words.

heh heh heh.

Now to rewrite the Day3/4 file, seperate it into chapters, and pick up 1450+ words...