10 April 2005

Similar Thought, Copying, and the Dread P Word

This one starts a bit odd, and perhaps suggests something I don't intend, but bear with me. All will be revealed. If in a rambling, anticlimactic fashion...

Damon Knight and Me
or: What Inspired This Nonsense
Born in 1922, Damon Knight wrote better than twenty science fiction novels and countless stories by the time he died in 2002. However, he will probably be always known for a single story, "To Serve Man", which appeared during the initial (and still best) running of the Twilight Zone.

Knight wasn't one of the BIG ONES for me. The first time I knowingly read a work of his was when I picked up his book on writing Creating Short Fiction in my efforts to improve my craft. (More on this in a bit.) The only short stories of his I've read are "Semper Fi" (which is in Creating Short Fiction) and, of course, "To Serve Man." Of his novels I've read but one, Why Do Birds, a really strange novel about the end of the world. All of this works I've mentioned I enjoyed, but I recommend Why Do Birds with some reservations; it's probably not for everyone.

The reason I bring up Knight is that I was flipping through Creating Short Fiction not too long ago and I came across a portion that gave me pause.

Knight writes, "There is an implied contract between the author and the reader that goes something like this: Give me your time and pay your money and I'll let you experience what it's like to be" a variety of different people in various situations (Knight 54). A very valid and perceptive view of the author/reader relationship.

My problem was, when I read it, I was certain I had copied the sentence in one of my essays. (This one, to be precise.) I was fairly sure I hadn't done it word for word, but it was, in my head, close enough to warrant a little owning up, and as soon as possible. Lord only knows I don't need the P-word attached to my name.

I start this essay up, gather information on Knight, keep Creating Short Fiction on hand to quote from, and then, and only then, I go back and look at the offending sentence. Which is this: "Every writer, no matter the field, promises to divert, to inform, or to provide some combination of the two."

Now I don't know about you, but I don't see any similarity between the two. Both talk about what the writer owes the reader, granted, but the thrust is entirely different. I'll humor myself and say that my sentence is more succinct than Knight's. It is pretty much the only thing I'll grant me; Knight's comment on the writer/reader contract is much better and one I would endorse fully. If I might further compliment myself, I think the two ideas complement each other and worth considering whenever one approaches Fiction.

Now where does that leave us? Well, with an essay that isn't as relative as I had feared, of course.

(There is still that little whisper I have at the corner of my mind about one of my other sentences in that essay, but I'll only bring that up if I can site it and if it's not another phantom of my self doubt.)

Similar Thought
The aforementioned confusion is an example of similar thought. Sometimes when writing on a subject matter, writers will come perilously close to duplication. It happens.

There are excellent examples of this through out the creative field. One that springs readily to mind is between Ramsey Campbell and Richard Matheson. Campbell's short story "A Street Was Chosen" is about a science experiment being run on unknowing neighbors which leads to violence and self destruction. It is very similar to Matheson's "The Distributor", in which a man moves into a neighborhood and performs similar actions there.

While the stories share similar trains of thought, they aren't copies by any strain of the imagination. Campbell's tale is more experimental, for one thing, while Matheson's is a bit more personal in nature. However, they tread the same path, reach the same destination, and leave the same disturbing realization that what happens in both stories could well happen in real life.

And maybe happening right now.

Another even better example comes from listening to two songs: "McCarthy Park" and "Classical Gas". For the most part two distinct pieces, there is a passage that is exactly note for note. The thing of it is, both songs were written at the same time; all it was was a startling coincidence.

As was said before, it happens. While the imaginative realm is vast and deep, it is not infinite. There's a good chance that, when writing, one will brush shoulders with another writer's work. The trick is recongnizing a brush when one sees it. Far too often readers will see a similar thought and call out "Copycat", or worse, the P-word.

Copying
This is not to say that there isn't copying in the writing world. Far from it. One writer reads another work, is inspired from it, and goes off and writes something like it. Sometimes it's within brushing distance, sometimes its a wee bit closer than that.

The worse offenders tend to be new writers struggling to find their voice. A good example of this would be Terry Brooks. Reading his first novel, Sword of Shannara , one can not help but notice similar beats to that of J. R. R. Tolkien's Lord of the Rings. Which isn't surprising as Lord of the Rings was one of the inspirations for Sword of Shannara . (Brooks talks about the novel's origins here.) If fact, to be brutally honest, one can't walk through the garden of Fantasy Fiction without tripping over a sprawling Tolkien wanna be.

Another example would be, again, Ramsey Campbell, whose first stories resembled that of Howard Phillip Lovecraft. Which, again, surprises no one. When running through the halls of Dark Fantasy, one tends to trip over the shatter remnants of Lovecraft imitators. A situation that might have well appalled Lovecraft to no end.

In time these writers move into their own niche and their works look less and less like their inspirations and more like the writers themselves. It's a growing process too many would-be critics think of as the P-word.

The P-Word
And, finally, there is the dread P-word. Plagiarism. It's a word tossed around far too often. It is the theft of ideas, of plot, of character.

The only example of plagiarism that comes readily to mind dealing with a specific author is perhaps the very worse example possible: that of William Shakespeare. Shakespeare stole. He stole a lot. But the problem with using him as an example is for one thing in his day and age plagiarism hadn't the connotation it does now. For another, Shakespeare made such vast improvements on what he took from it seems rather petty to complain about.

In Closing
Well this has been a bit of a ramble, hasn't it? Almost anticlimactic, too, as if the writer lost track of where he was going towards the end and sort of stumbled to a stop. But that can't possibly be what happened could it?

For a third time, it happens.

There is more to say on this particular issue (specifically on plots and characters), but that is better suited for other essays. Ones that are better structured, say...

Oh well. I can't always be brilliant...
______________________
I'm going to try and follow what I remember of MLA style report writing while composing essays. Which will result in source siting sections such as this one:

Knight, Damon. Creating Short Fiction. New York: St. Martin's Press, 1997

09 April 2005

Night Visitors - A Poem

Let me not open my eyes to find
What I suspect is with me tonight
Let them be merciful and kind
And give me not a single bite.

Let them whisper where they stand
Let them poke and tickle my feet.
Let them try all the tricks they can
Our eyes shall never ever meet.

Let it all be just a dream
Let it end with dawn's break
Let it not be what it does seem
Let it be sleep alone from me they take

Let it all end 'fore it begins
Let there be no real goblins

I was going to post the picture this poem inspired. It's a nice little picture, with three goblin creatures sitting at someone's feet. The poem fits it perfectly.

Problem is, the pictures, dark, and when it's reduced to fit, it makes everything in it that much harder to see. I supposed I could lighten it up a tad, but it ruins the effect.

Oh well.

Sonnets are not the easiest things in the world to write, at least for me. When I hear rhymes it's usually in couplets. It's good thing to stretch and try difficult things sometimes.

It might be a while before the next poem. I REALLY have to put up some fiction soon... Else that subheading beneath my title will be really incorrect.

08 April 2005

Site Report - Future Predictions

Well that's a bummer.

I suspected I would miss a day. I didn't think it would happen due to computer miscues. Yesterday, fully prepared to post, I tried to log in only to be thwarted. I couldn't even get on to the sign in page.

Was it my computer's fault? An error on this site's part? A problem with the internet connection? Martian mind probes? Who knows? Who cares?

Oh well. It's not that it's vital I post every day. I'm not getting paid less, nor will I lose my job over it. I've only been trying to post at least once a day every day in a week in the hopes of making it a habit. So far so good

I was doing this for two purposes. The first wass to improve my writing skills. The more you do something the better at it you become. I hope that my spelling and grammar is also boosted as I go back through these posts and edit my little gaffs.

The second was simply to set and meet deadlines. A way for me to get used to the idea. After all, when I finally "go pro", as it were, there are going to be deadlines and consequences for missing deadlines. Best to work out any problems I have now while it doesn't matter as much.

Having said that, I plan to take weekends off in May, starting the first week of May .

Sounds like a bit of a contradiction, doesn't it?

I'm not talking about a literal Cullen goofs off type day off. Instead, I plan on working on content for this site. Partially to create a bit of a buffer in case I have to skip a day, but mainly to ease some of the "Gotta Get A Post Up!" Hopefully a more relaxed attitude might improve the quality of my posts. And, as I'm not working with current events just yet, I think I can get away with it.

Taking the weekends off should last only through May, though I might do it again or extend it if I need to. If something occurs to me on those weekends, I'll post; I just won't feel obligated to post on those days.

Ultimately I'd like to set a certain schedule of articles, reviews, and (God willing) fiction and be able to stick to it. Perhaps having a bit of a buffer will be one step towards that goal.

(And perhaps not.)

In the near future, I remind you, I intend further discussion on my views on writing, (types of genre, the pros and cons of Outlining, the use of "How To" books, that sort of thing), authors I have read and who've inspired me, more capsule reviews covering the Godzilla series, and a little essay dealing with the writer Damon Knight.

Tomorrow, however, I hope to have a little picture and poem up for the enjoyment of all. And yes, I realize that makes 3 poems over the zero pieces of fiction I've put up. That's gotta change, too. (The particular picture I'm thinking of using sort of inspires other thoughts... It'll be nice seeing it again. Sort of.)

Be seeing you then. Assuming, of course, this modern technology doesn't bite me again.

(Keeps up, I might become a Luddite...)

06 April 2005

Capsule Reviews - Showa Godzilla (3)

Here are capsule reviews for the Showa Godzilla movies that were released in the years between 1971 and 1975. Only minor spoilers are given, with only the barest of plots to preserve some of the joys of the films. Longer reviews will appear when warranted.

Part One is located here
Part Two is located here


Gojira tai Hedorâ (1971)
aka Godzilla v. Hedora
aka Godzilla v. the Smog Monster
Director: Yoshimitsu Banno

A terrible monster is created from the pollution of man. Only Godzilla and a dedicated scientist can save the Earth from its devastating power.

Poor Yoshimitsu Banno. Here he was, thinking he made an excellent movie, even planning a sequel using Hedora again, only to have the producer, Tomoyuki Tanaka, tell him that he had “ruined Godzilla”.

As if Gojira-Minira-Gabara: Oru kaijû daishingeki hadn’t already done as much…

In comparison to the previous outing, Gojira tai Hedorâ is almost praiseworthy. There is no recycling of footage, for one thing. While it clings to the Godzilla Plot, Hedora is an actual threat to both Godzilla and Humanity. What could be better?

This movie, for one thing. It drags. It’s filled with bizarre and pointless imagery. It preaches, oh how it preaches. Godzilla suddenly becomes a scientist at the end, or psychic. His breath obtains mystic and magical properties…

Godzilla fans have been calling this the worst Godzilla movie, and it’s hard to argue.

Still, it’s almost worth recommending for just one moment: Godzilla, chasing Hedora, flies. The damnedest moment in the whole Showa series. However, as it is possible to see the scene online (for instance, here at Badmovies.org, if you happen to want to spare yourself the anguish), you might want to spare yourself.


Chikyû kogeki meirei: Gojira tai Gaigan (1972)
aka Godzilla on Monster Island
aka Godzilla v. Gigan
Director: Jun Fukuda

Alien invaders plot to kill Godzilla and take over the world with the help of the Kaijû Gigan and Ghidora. Only a manga artist and his friends can save the radioactive dinosaur from certain doom.


While this movie isn’t nearly as good as Fukuda’s earlier work, it is still a step up from Gojira tai Hedorâ. Just not a big step. Gigan is one of the most unusual of Godzilla’s foes, with his hook hands and saw blade belly (!). Ghidorah, when not presented via scenes from previous Godzilla movies, looks awfully stiff.

Notable for the only Godzilla movie where the viewer can understand a portion of Godzilla’s speech. (It was revealed that Godzilla was capable of communication way back in San daikaijû: Chikyu saidai no kessen, remember.)


Gojira tai Megaro (1973)
aka Godzilla vs. Megalon
Director: Jun Fukuda

The underground dwelling Seatopians, furious at Humanity’s mistreatment of the Earth, steal the robot Jet Jaguar from its creators. It is immediately set to diabolical use, acting as a guide to the Kaijû Gigan and Megalon in the destruction of the surface.

This marks the last of the REALLY BAD Showa Godzilla movies. It’s mainly about Jet Jaguar, that Ultraman/Spectreman wannabe, and his creators struggle to regain control of him. Dull as dirt.

Except, to be perfectly honest, there is some small degree of charm towards the end as Godzilla finally enters the picture. It might be worth fastfowarding through the other parts to see. Beyond that…


Gojira tai Mekagojira (1974)
aka Godzilla v. Bionic Monster
aka Godzilla v. Cosmic Monster
aka Godzilla v. Mechagodzilla
Director: Jun Fukuda

The heroic Godzilla has gone rouge, returning to his city stomping ways and even brutally attacking his friend Anguirus. The only hope of stopping the rampage can be found in an ancient prophecy and, perhaps, the God King Shisa.

That synopsis keeps the mystery of what’s going on far better than the movie does; one roar from Godzilla and viewers know something is up. (Well, that and the title). On top of this is yet another alien threat and the Godzilla Plot unadorned and unloved.

Still, this is an entertaining entry in the series and a decent farewell from Fukuda to the series. Shisa is distinctive looking in amongst the dinosaurs and giant animals Godzilla usually encounters, though his powers are a bit of a dud. Well worth a watching.


Mekagojira no gyakushu
(1975)
aka Terror of Mechagodzilla
Director: Ishirô Honda

Once more the world is threatened by the terror of Mechagodzilla. But this time he has help from the mammoth Titanosaurus. Can Godzilla alone stop them both?

The final Godzilla of the Showa era, this isn’t a bad way to go out. Titanosaurus is a bit of a drip, however, and we have yet again another alien invasion to deal with (same ones as last time, by all appearances.) But, all in all, not a bad little film.


This ends the look at the Showa era Godzilla.

Part One is located here
Part Two is located here

05 April 2005

Capsule Reviews - Showa Godzilla (2)

Here are capsule reviews for the Showa Godzilla movies that were released in the years between 1966 and 1969. Only minor spoilers are given, with only the barest of plots to preserve some of the joys of the films. Longer reviews will appear when warranted.

Part One is located here
Part Three is located here


Gojira, Ebirâ, Mosura: Nankai no daiketto (1966)
aka Godzilla v. the Sea Monster
Director: Jun Fukuda

The four castaways wake on an island that is, unfortunately, far from deserted. It is the base of the military group known as the Red Bamboo as well as the home of the Kaijû Ebirah, a massive man eating lobster. On top of all of this, the four find Godzilla sleeping in an underground cave. With discovery by the Red Bamboo's search parties only a matter of time, they form a desperate plan: wake Godzilla and hope to find a way off the island in the resulting confusion.

From this point on, Jun Fukuda is the regular series director. Unlike the majority of Honda's films, Fukuda's Godzilla films are decidedly absurd and do nothing for the radioactive dinosaur's fearsome image.

Nevertheless, they are entertaining films and Nankai no daiketto is one of the best of the bunch, with one incident following the next so quick that one has little time to wonder at how daft it all is. (But afterwards... oh, afterwards...)

Originally, this film was to star King Kong and it shows. Godzilla uses physical attacks far more often than usual, and at one point shows a decided interest in a beautiful woman, something far more suited for his erstwhile ape opponent. Ebirah is, while somewhat impressive visually, a poor choice of monster to pit against the aquatic fire breathing dinosaur.

Note that this an inversion of the previous film, Kaijû daisenso, in which not only the Guardian Kaijû defeated by the Invader, he is defeated twice.

(One could make a case for Godzilla being a Guardian Kaijû as well, as he does show an interest in the beautiful woman, to the point of rescuing her. However, that particular moment goes nowhere. He never returns her phone calls and later pretends not to know her.)

aka Son of Godzilla
Director: Jun Fukuda

A scientific research team, located on a jungle island plagued by giant mantises known as the Kamacuras, learns that they also share the island with a lost egg belong to Godzilla. Unfortunately, the egg has been emitting a distress signal and Godzilla arrives to rescue his newfound son, destroying the team's camp in process. Now the scientists have to deal with the savage Kamacuras, a sudden illness, and a radioactive dinosaur teaching his son the tricks of the trade. If that isn't bad enough, the island's true threat, Kumonga, wakes and begins to scuttle about the island for food.

This movie is notable for several reasons, primarily the introduction of the mildly disturbing son of Godzilla, Minya. The second is that, while the Kamacuras and Kumonga are both inclined to eat the Humans, they also lean towards dinosaur meat, making them a markedly different threat than Godzilla's previous foes. Finally, this is one of the rare Godzilla films that end with Humanity triumphant over Godzilla.

After a wee slow patch at the start, the movie takes off and, like the previous Nankai no daiketto, does not let up. Most entertaining, so long as you like goofy movies.

(Small note: the English version refers to the Kamacuras as Gimantis and Kumonga as Spiga.)


Kaijû sôshingeki (1968)
aka Destroy All Monsters
Director: Ishirô Honda

In the far flung future of 1999, all of Earth's Kaijû have been contained on a single island known as Monster Island. This proves to be a less than sound an idea as aliens invade the island and take possession of the titans, sending them out to beat Humanity into submission.

The return of Honda to the series brings with him a mild return of form to the series. The movie spends entirely too much time on the search for the alien invaders, but as nearly every one of Toho's monster roster is on display within its running time, it's hard to complain.

At one point intended to be the end of the Godzilla series.


Gojira-Minira-Gabara: Oru kaijû daishingeki (1969)
aka Godzilla's Revenge
Director: Ishirô Honda

A troubled young boy imagines himself to be Minya's best friend and learns a little bit about courage in the process.

The Showa Godzilla series drops straight to the bottom with this film. That's not to say there aren't good moments in this movie; there are. Unfortunately, they've all been stolen from previous Godzilla movies. This film is little more than a rehash episode with a few new sequences added in.

It's tempting to label this not only the worst Godzilla movie of all time, but also the worse Kaiju movie ever released. Sadly, this is not the case. Three other future Showa Godzilla movies would rivaling it for the spot.

On this is the existence Uchu kaijû Gamera (Super Gamera) which redefines pain. It uses the same cost cutting measures as Oru kaijû daishingeki, using footage from earlier Gamera movies. Only, unlike Oru kaijû daishingeki, it is without the wit, humor, and intelligence a kick to the head provides. Avoid. At all cost.


This ends Part Two of this look at the Showa Godzilla.
Part One is located here.
Part Three is located here

04 April 2005

Site Report - Closed on Account of ZZZs

Today will be a bit of a dud, as I've gotten next to zero sleep due to personal stupidity and roofers working on my roof. Tomorrow I hope to finish up the Showa Godzilla reviews. Later in the week, more essays on writing, including genres and divisions in fiction, favorite writers, and Damon Knight.

03 April 2005

Capsule Reviews - Showa Godzilla (1)

Here, for your consideration, are capsule reviews for the Godzilla movies in the Showa series, made between the years 1954 to 1965. Only minor spoilers are given, with only the barest of plots to preserve some of the joys of the films. Longer reviews will appear when warranted.

Part Two to this series is located here.

Part Three is located here

aka Godzilla
Director: Ishirô Honda

A giant dinosaur, disturbed by atomic testing, begins destroying fishing boats. When the military steps into end this threat, the beast leaves its hunting grounds to wreck havoc on Japan. Its downbeat nature really sets it apart from the other monster movies of the period.

A bit slow moving, this is nonetheless an excellent example of the giant movie genre in general and Kaijû (Japanese Giant Monsters) in general. The film comes in two varieties: regular version and Raymond Burr enhanced.


aka Gigantis the Fire Monster
aka Godzilla Raids Again
Director: Motoyoshi Oda

A second Godzilla appears, battling a new monster (Anguirus). After defeating its opponent, the massive monster continues the destruction his predecessor started.

This is one of the lesser known Godzilla movies, and for good cause: it’s very dull. It’s notable for the introduction of Anguirus (who is notable for the wide variety of indignities put upon him), and being one of two Showa Godzilla movies directed by someone other than Ishirô Honda or Jun Fukuda.


aka King Kong v. Godzilla
Director: Ishirô Honda

As Godzilla escapes his icy prison, an expedition to a distant island captures the Ape God Kong. As the expedition bringing Kong nears Japan, he detects the presence of Godzilla and frees himself in order to hunt down the monster.

A rather silly movie with a sad looking Kong, this is nonetheless one of the highlights of the Showa series. It is also the first Godzilla movie to follow the Godzilla Plot.


aka Godzilla v. the Thing
aka Godzilla v. Mothra
Director: Ishirô Honda

A giant egg washes up on a Japanese beach and claimed by a land developer. As Godzilla wakes from his slumber to once more thunder across the countryside, a pair of reporters and a scientist struggle to convince the developer to return the egg to its rightful owner, the Moth Goddess Mothra.

A more serious sequel than Kingukongu tai Gojira, this is another entertaining installment in the series and a step up in quality. (Not a large step, mind you…)


aka Ghidorah, the Three-Headed Monster
Director: Ishirô Honda

A foreign princess, injured in an assassination attempt, reveals herself to be a Prophetess from Outer Space. She predicts the return of the monsters Godzilla and Rodan, but these monsters pale besides the coming world destroyer, Space Monster Ghidorah. Mothra is summoned to convince Godzilla and Rodan to fight against the newcomer, but neither monster is willing assist humanity

A bit of a dip after Mosura tai Gojira, this is Toho’s first monster mash, featuring all of its major monsters and introducing Godzilla’s greatest enemy. From this point on, Godzilla would be portrayed as less of a monster and more of a hero.

Note the hypocrisy going on as Mothra talks with Godzilla and Rodan. Both monsters object to saving the Earth based on Humanity always attacking them. The nerve! They started it!

(This marks Rodan's second appearance. His first, in the movie Sora no daikaijû Radon/Rodan, is reviewed here)


Aka Godzilla v. Monster Zero
Director: Ishirô Honda

Ghidorah has left Earth and is now plaguing the hidden Planet X. The inhabitants there ask for the assistance of the monsters Godzilla and Rodan, but their motives are less than benevolent...

Another dip in the Godzilla series, though not out and out terrible. This movie stars Nick Adams and varies the standard formula by having the Guardian Monsters beat the Invader twice instead of just once.


This ends Part One of this look at the Showa Godzilla.
Part Two to this series is located here.
Part Three is located here