somethin movin in the dark
somethin followin in the park
evenin stroll turns to a run
lookin back reveals no one
somethin movin all the same
somethin playin a nasty game
runnin down an empty street
somethin nippin at sneakered feet
nearin front door; almost there
leapin up over every stair
slammin shut the old oak door
hopin that there'll be no more
slumpin silent, scared to death
tryin hard to catch a breath
waitin brings no further fear
strainin now for sound to hear
nothin out there now but the night
nothin there to give a fright
somethin followin in the park
evenin stroll turns to a run
lookin back reveals no one
somethin movin all the same
somethin playin a nasty game
runnin down an empty street
somethin nippin at sneakered feet
nearin front door; almost there
leapin up over every stair
slammin shut the old oak door
hopin that there'll be no more
slumpin silent, scared to death
tryin hard to catch a breath
waitin brings no further fear
strainin now for sound to hear
nothin out there now but the night
nothin there to give a fright
I can't help but feel that there should be more to this, but this is as far as I can go. The style I chose for this limits me too much, to the point I can't say yea or nay to whether something was chasing the subject of this poem or even what that something was. More detail, I think, might have been nice.
I may come back to this at a later date. Or redo it using a less restrictive style of writing. There something about the rhythm that I like...
I may come back to this at a later date. Or redo it using a less restrictive style of writing. There something about the rhythm that I like...
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